23 June 2005 @ 04:37 pm
Ficlet: Of Two Hours  
Title: Of Two Hours
Author: tigs
Characters: Zelenka, McKay/Sheppard (but not explicit)
Rating: Teen. Pretty mild.
Disclaimer: Unfortunately none of them are mine. So sad.
Summary: Most days, Radek appreciates it, how he and Rodney can communicate in half sentences.

Notes: Unbeta'd, since I just decided today that it might be fun to try my hand at writing Zelenka fic. Apologies for any errors that might be contained herein.



After a year and a half on Atlantis, this Radek knows: when Rodney is in the lab things go *drama*. They go all CAPITAL LETTERS and italics and bold crisis and Rodney’s hands wave, wave, wave. Under Radek’s nose and Kavanagh’s—and Radek admires him for that, he does, because that is Rodney taking his life in his own hands—and he’s pretty sure that he would wave them under Miko’s nose, too, if they all didn’t think that she would bolt like a scared rabbit.

She is too good of a scientist to make her bolt.

Some mornings, though, when the circumstances of the previous evening are correct, Radek knows that he can plot and make careful plans. Knows that he’ll be able to get to the labs early, that he’ll have a full two hours before Rodney arrives and that gives him time to poke at his projects all by himself, in peace and quiet. To play with the pieces of Ancient technology that they find, or run his tests on the ZPM without Rodney trying to distract him every 2.3 seconds, asking "Did you try—?" and "Have you considered—?"

Most days, Radek appreciates it, how he and Rodney can communicate in half sentences. But occasionally not, not when Radek is good scientist and there is method, and yes, he will eventually try and consider and if he doesn’t and still cannot make it work, then he will ask Rodney’s opinion, yes?

So, circumstances conspire the night before, and Radek is in the lab early. It is empty, just Radek and workbenches and oddly beeping machines and it reminds him of his favorite times back at the university, when he would come in on Saturday and Sunday and no one else would be around. He would work in peace; he would get a lot done. Atlantis has no Saturday, no Sunday—they exist only in name, that is—so that’s what Radek’s two-hour blocks have become to him. Also, the end of the two hours feels like Monday mornings used to: his colleagues will stumble in and they’ll talk about their evenings and their projects and that, he tries to tell Rodney, is a good time for the ‘tries’ and ‘considers’ that Rodney tosses about. Then Radek will welcome it. Mostly. Usually. When he’s not wishing for just an hour more to himself. He wishes in the way that a child asks for one more hour of wakefulness before they must go to bed. It is wrong, not in his best interest, but it never hurts to ask.

Usually that is the way that Radek feels, but this morning it is different—an hour in, an hour of staring at an old ZPM and he makes a breakthrough. There is a little piece near the base, a little groove, and he remembers one of the pieces of technology they found in a room four floors down, and he thinks if they did this—

And they did that—

—and suddenly he needs for Rodney to be there with him, asking his little questions and pushing both of their minds to greater heights. Even if it means exposing his plotting and his planning and his reasons for how he knows which days he’ll be able to have his two hours, he must have Rodney now, because this is BIG and deserves italics and lots of wave, wave, wave.

So, with 55 minutes left until the other scientists usually start straggling in, Radek leaves the lab and starts walking quickly down the corridors, until he reaches Major Sheppard’s quarters.

He knocks, loudly, and even through the door he can hear a thump and a muffled swear and then the sound of someone coming to the door, and when it opens it is Major Sheppard. Of course it is, and he is wearing boxers and pulling on his T-shirt. He looks flustered, hair standing even more on end than usual, but Radek is already looking past him, searching the room for Rodney.

"Dr. Zelenka," Sheppard says slowly, deliberately, and just a tad too loudly, as if wishing his voice to carry further back into the apartment. "This is a surprise."

He must notice that Radek is not rolling his eyes with fear, and thus knows that the city is not in any danger, and that is why he does not first ask what is wrong. Or maybe he just knows that Radek would not be the designated bringer of bad news.

"McKay," Radek says without preamble. He does not see Rodney in the main room, which means there is only one place for him to be. "Tell me he is not hiding in toilet."

Major Sheppard turns a little pale. He swallows once, quickly, and Radek can hear his denials before he even opens his mouth. He tries to wave his hand at Sheppard, shushing him, so that he can get onto the important part of this conversation, but Sheppard starts in on the denials anyway. Plus, he laughs. Nervously, with a touch of hysteria added in.

"McKay? Why would he be hiding in my bathroom?"

Radek rolls his eyes. "Because he spends the night here, but that is not important—"

Sheppard, of course, interrupts him. He draws himself up, as if trying to intimidate Radek without being obvious about it; it’s impossible, though, with his hair sticking out the way it is. He says, "Wait, wait, what are you—?"

"I *know*," Radek says, trying his hand at waving the Major quiet again, and this time it works. "Is obvious. You come by lab late at night, you make googly eyes at each other, you make some excuse for Rodney to leave with you, and I have two hours of peace and quiet in lab next morning—and some other time, I must thank you for this, but not now. Now I must speak with Rodney."

He hopes that his words will provoke a reaction from Rodney, prove he is hiding in toilet, and indeed they do. The door slides open and Rodney steps out into the main room, wearing his pants and an unzipped shirt, and Radek notices the Major is glaring at him.

He says, "Rodney," but Rodney just waves his hand in Radek’s direction and says, "Well, obviously he already knows or he wouldn’t be at your door asking for me, now would he? And maybe you’d consider asking him in so that all of Atlantis doesn’t end up outside your door, hearing this conversation?"

The Major flushes, then motions for Radek to enter. He does and the door slides shut behind him. The Major says, "Now listen, Dr. Zelen—"

But now he is inside, face to face with Rodney, and there is no more time for petty small talk. There is ZPM, with piece of equipment with matching grooves, and there is no coincidence, only a connection that has not yet been discovered. He interrupts, says, "Rodney, I was doing work on the ZPM—"

That makes Rodney stand up straighter, as Radek knew that it would, and also it makes him look as if he is going to start ranting, as he does, and that will waste more time. Before Rodney can interrupt, though, Radek says, "No, no. Let me finish. There is groove at base of ZPM, yes?"

Rodney nods, deflating slightly as a thoughtful look comes over his face. Already, the proverbial wheels are turning; Radek can nearly hear them grinding together.

"Remember in the room, down there? The one with the—?" He gestures, and Rodney nods. Out of the corner of his eye, Radek can see that the Major’s starting to look amused, but Radek does not want to devote any of his brain to puzzling out why.

"There was that one machine, with the—" He sticks two fingers up in a ‘V’ like an antenna, because for some unknown reason, the machine had one. "And also—"

"The compartment," Rodney finishes for him. "With the matching— Oh my god, of course! Why didn’t we see it? Did you—?"

Radek shakes his head, because no, he didn’t try to fit them together; he knows that Rodney would never forgive him if he did, and besides, he doubts that it will be as simple as fitting two pieces of equipment together and making them both work. With the Ancients, it never is. It is better for the both of them to be there, to work together, so that when Rodney says, "Have you considered—?" Radek will be able to say, "Yes, yes, but how about—?"

Radek watches as Rodney’s hands fumble with his zipper, clumsy with excitement, and now the Major isn’t just looking amused, he is laughing. He says, "Well, I guess the two of you had better get on it then."

"Yes, yes," Rodney says, and his mind is already in the laboratory, fitting the ZPM and the machine together, Radek can tell. But then Rodney’s gaze shifts and he reaches out to squeeze the Major’s elbow, then slides his hand down to his hand, and Radek decides to give them a moment, so he starts for the door. Rodney follows just a step behind him.

Outside, in the hallway, Rodney says, "First, we should decide: do we move the ZPM to the machine, or the machine to the ZPM?"

"I think—" he says, and he waves his hand around, indicating the lab and the machine four floors down both, and he watches as Rodney nods.

"Yes, yes, exactly," Rodney says, "I agree." He continues, already speculating as to what will happen when the ZPM and the machine are joined, moving three steps forward with every possible outcome, moving the same pathways that Radek’s brain is. They are on the same page.

And no matter that Radek occasionally likes his peace and quiet, his two hours of time alone, this, he thinks, this is good.
 
 
 
κάτι τρέχει στα γύφτικα_inbetween_ on June 23rd, 2005 09:55 pm (UTC)
This is perfectly charming and exactly what I've been thinking of today, Radek as a scientist under Rodney. Well, not under Rodney like John might be under him. You know what I mean *wave wave wave* Love it.
tigstigs on June 25th, 2005 04:09 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much!

They have the most wonderful working dynamic ever, imo. Just so much fun to watch! Hopefully we'll get a lot more of them in S2.
(no subject) - _inbetween_ on June 25th, 2005 04:17 pm (UTC) (Expand)
thegrrrl: the czech guythegrrrl2002 on June 23rd, 2005 10:01 pm (UTC)
Oh cool! This is a perfectly wonderful peek inside of Zelenka's head, and into his relationship with Rodney. They're just too groovy together. *g* I love it.
tigstigs on June 25th, 2005 04:17 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much! Rodney and Zelenka are so much fun together. And yes, groovy. :) I'm so glad you liked!
teaphile on June 23rd, 2005 10:03 pm (UTC)
because this is BIG and deserves italics and lots of wave, wave, wave
...
so that when Rodney says, "Have you considered—?" Radek will be able to say, "Yes, yes, but how about—?"


I love the way you brought these ideas back. It's quite amusing.
tigstigs on June 25th, 2005 04:18 pm (UTC)
I adore the technobabbling I've heard them do on the show and I just had to--well, actually that was what the whole story was built around.

Thank you!
The Porn Fairy: John squeeshetiger on June 23rd, 2005 10:07 pm (UTC)
OMG how much do I love this?

***************THIS MUCH*********************************!!!!

"McKay," Radek says without preamble. He does not see Rodney in the main room, which means there is only one place for him to be. "Tell me he is not hiding in toilet."

Oh, perfect. I love Zelenka just plowing on ahead, already having seen the problems and wanting to skip over them because they're not important, and Shep being understandably freaked out (and rumpled, sqee!), and Rodney getting caught up in the excitement but not forgetting John completely. Oh, so much love. Thank you for this.
tigstigs on June 25th, 2005 04:23 pm (UTC)
Yay! I'm so glad that you liked it so much!

This is just the way I see it happening, I guess. That Zelenka just wouldn't care, not unless it was somehow affecting his ability to do his work. But even then, only because of his work. And I don't really know what I'm saying here, so I should probably just say, Thank You! Yay!
Klo the hobbit: Right again by lindir_jaxklo_the_hobbit on June 23rd, 2005 10:09 pm (UTC)
Sqqqueeeee! *rolls on the floor in fangirlish glee* Love love love it! I love the way Radek and Rodney interact. Like when they tag-team Weird in The Storm. So CAYOOOTE! And I love that he goes straight to Sheppards room to find Rodney. Wwhheeeeeee! PERFICK!
*klo*
Klo the hobbit: Patchworkklo_the_hobbit on June 23rd, 2005 10:11 pm (UTC)
WEIR. DAMMIT!!! Every damn time *headmeetdesk*
*klo*
(no subject) - tigs on June 25th, 2005 04:31 pm (UTC) (Expand)
shell: sheppardumbo on June 23rd, 2005 10:24 pm (UTC)
This was WONDERFUL, and I loved it, and you'll have to imagine some hand waving to go along with that :-)
tigstigs on June 25th, 2005 04:33 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much! Yay! I'm so glad that you liked it so well! :-)
her soul like a prism: otpchopchica on June 23rd, 2005 10:26 pm (UTC)
This was just painfully adorable.
tigstigs on June 25th, 2005 04:34 pm (UTC)
Aww, thank you!
chelle: Zelenka gifmmmchelle on June 23rd, 2005 10:32 pm (UTC)
Very cool story. I love Radek's two hours alone. And his reaction to John, and the way he just doesn't care about John and Rodney's relationship, beyond the time it gets him in the lab. Yet, he genuinely likes Rodney and the way they work together.

Wonderful fic. Thank you.
tigstigs on June 25th, 2005 04:59 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much!

As I was writing this, I just got the image of him not caring at all, how it just wouldn't be important to him, but how John wouldn't immediately *get* that. I don't know. I just really like Rodney and Radek's working relationship and I wanted to explore that some.

Thank you again! I'm so glad that you liked!
C: stargate atlantis: rodney tired (me)krabbypatty on June 23rd, 2005 10:36 pm (UTC)
Oh! So.much.love.
go all CAPITAL LETTERS and italics and bold crisis and Rodney’s hands wave, wave, wave.
Hee.
as if trying to intimidate Radek without being obvious about it; it’s impossible, though, with his hair sticking out the way it is.
*snort*

And then you know, that whole last part rocked, because it's so... them.
tigstigs on June 25th, 2005 05:02 pm (UTC)
Yay! Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it!

They're all just too much fun together... *happy sigh*
Davidian High Priestess: fandom <3 geeks :: elven_wolfpega on June 23rd, 2005 10:42 pm (UTC)
That was beyond adorable. Thank you for feeding my Zelenka obsession ;)
tigstigs on June 25th, 2005 05:03 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I'm so glad you liked!
Cellicelli on June 23rd, 2005 10:45 pm (UTC)
That is great. *hugs Radek*
tigstigs on June 25th, 2005 05:03 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
Chantal: mcshep by knarzwriterlibrarian on June 23rd, 2005 10:46 pm (UTC)
Very cool. Loved it. So very Zelenka with a sidedish of McShep.

Really loved it.

tigstigs on June 25th, 2005 05:03 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I'm so glad that you loved it! :-)
Mary the Fanmarythefan on June 23rd, 2005 10:47 pm (UTC)
Oh. I just. Can't even. I mean.

:waves, waves, waves hands:

There's so much I want to say about this, the voice and the charming way it snaps along and I'm just. Left here. Waving my hands about incoherently. Thank you for sharing this.
tigstigs on June 25th, 2005 05:05 pm (UTC)
Thank you! Your feedback left me grinning quite widely. I'm so glad that you liked!
Alyse: Zelenkaalyse on June 23rd, 2005 10:54 pm (UTC)
Oh, that was so wonderful. There were so many little moments in there, little observations and you captured the way that Zelenka's mind works, and the way he interacts with Rodney, perfectly.
tigstigs on June 25th, 2005 05:08 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I'm so glad that everything in the story worked so well for you! Zelenka and Rodney really are just too much fun together. I hope we get a lot more of them in S2.

Thank you!
I'm not fluent in your dialect of crazy: dandeliondine on June 23rd, 2005 11:09 pm (UTC)
oh YES! totally fabulous Zelenka; you caught the essence of him - speech/thought patterns felt perfectly on target. and I loved the whole McShep bit.

there's *lots* of wave, wave, wave going on here right now
tigstigs on June 25th, 2005 05:11 pm (UTC)
Yay! I have to say, actually, that I was a little nervous, given that this was my first time writing Zelenka in anything other than a supporting role. I'm so relieved that he seems to have worked for people.

Thank you so much for the kind comments! I'm wave, wave, waving back. :-D
Ursula M. Bestebluestarmuse on June 23rd, 2005 11:14 pm (UTC)
Very cool fic. +grins+ I love how Radek sees his relationship with Rodney and how he knows about Rodney/John. +grins+ And also, this was absolutely perfect:

But then Rodney’s gaze shifts and he reaches out to squeeze the Major’s elbow, then slides his hand down to his hand, and Radek decides to give them a moment, so he starts for the door.

^_^
tigstigs on June 25th, 2005 05:14 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much! Rodney and Radek are just too much fun together, imo. (As are John and Rodney. :-))

I'm so glad you liked the story! Yay!
Sandy: Radak Hands_thegrrrl2002sp23 on June 24th, 2005 12:05 am (UTC)
Agree with everyone. What a perfect little story. You give great Zelenka. *g*

Loved the McShep, too. :)
tigstigs on June 25th, 2005 05:15 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much!
darkseaglass on June 24th, 2005 01:00 am (UTC)
Terrific!!! Loved it.
tigstigs on June 25th, 2005 05:15 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
Coreopsis: duet by sinbratcoreopsis on June 24th, 2005 01:30 am (UTC)
when Rodney is in the lab things go *drama*. They go all CAPITAL LETTERS and italics and bold crisis and Rodney’s hands wave, wave, wave.


hee. That is brilliant. I really love Zelenka and his two hours and plotting how to get them, speaking in half sentences with Rodney and and and... all of it. *g*
tigstigs on June 25th, 2005 05:19 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much! I adore the techno-babble when it pops up on the show, and I really wanted to write some. (Despite not having inherited any of the science genes in my family...) Anyway, yay! I'm so glad you liked!
minnowminnow1212 on June 24th, 2005 02:01 am (UTC)
Whee, Zelenka!

My own hands were doing little happy waves of "oh so very cute." All of them, really.
tigstigs on June 25th, 2005 05:19 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much! I'm so glad that you liked!
tafkarfanfictafkarfanfic on June 24th, 2005 03:12 am (UTC)
when Rodney is in the lab things go *drama*. They go all CAPITAL LETTERS and italics and bold crisis and Rodney’s hands wave, wave, wave.
This is a FANTASTIC image. I like it.

And I like this story, in general.
tigstigs on June 25th, 2005 05:20 pm (UTC)
Yay! Thank you!
rache: zelenka little man by thegrrrlwickedwords on June 24th, 2005 03:36 am (UTC)
Great Zelenka voice, and love his interaction with Rodney. Just lovely
tigstigs on June 25th, 2005 05:21 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much! Rodney and Zelenka are just too wonderful together, when they do their scientist thing. I'm so glad that you liked!
Rose Wilde-Irishrosewildeirish on June 24th, 2005 04:10 am (UTC)
Oh, nice! And fun. Hee!
tigstigs on June 25th, 2005 05:21 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
Grey Bardgrey_bard on June 24th, 2005 05:20 am (UTC)
Oh, man. I can just *see* it. Wonderful!
tigstigs on June 25th, 2005 05:21 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I'm so glad that you liked!
rogue equestrian: SGA:: geek cave!elvinborn on June 24th, 2005 05:26 am (UTC)
how fun! and so like them. love that Zelenka *knows* and uses it to his advantage :) but I love the McKay and Zelenka half conversing even more :)
tigstigs on June 25th, 2005 05:25 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I just adore Rodney and Zelenka's techno-babbling in half sentences... They just work way too well together on the show.